Dear HEYs.
Last Sunday, I see Ekiden in grandmother's house.
Ekiden is a traditional sports in Japan, which looks like a marason relay race.
Many audience chir up to them.
Sport is the view in the real.
Thanks
先週の日曜日、祖母の家で駅伝を見てきました。
駅伝は日本の伝統的なスポーツで、駅伝のようなものです。
駅伝は日本の伝統的なスポーツで、駅伝のようなもので、多くの観客が歓声をあげます。
スポーツは現実の中の景色です。
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# Improving of L
先週の日曜日、祖母の家で駅伝を見てきました。
駅伝は日本の伝統的なスポーツで、数キロに及ぶ長距離リレーのようなものです。
多くの観客が走っている選手を応援します。
やっぱりスポーツは生で見るのが一番ですね。
Last Sunday, I watched an Ekiden at my grandmother's house.
Ekiden is a traditional Japanese sport, a kind of long-distance relay race covering several kilometers.
Many people cheer for the runners.
After all, the best way to watch sports is to see them live.
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# Corrections by DMM teacher
「Ekiden」✅✅✅✅✅
Last Sunday, I watched Ekiden in my grandmother's house.
Ekiden is a traditional Japanese sport, a kind of long-distance relay race covering several kilometers.
Many people cheer up the runners.
After all, the best way to watch sports is to see them live.
Last Sunday, I see Ekiden in grandmother's house.
Ekiden is a traditional sports in Japan, which looks like a marason relay race.
Many audience chir up to them.
Sport is the view in the real.
Thanks
先週の日曜日、祖母の家で駅伝を見てきました。
駅伝は日本の伝統的なスポーツで、駅伝のようなものです。
駅伝は日本の伝統的なスポーツで、駅伝のようなもので、多くの観客が歓声をあげます。
スポーツは現実の中の景色です。
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# Improving of L
先週の日曜日、祖母の家で駅伝を見てきました。
駅伝は日本の伝統的なスポーツで、数キロに及ぶ長距離リレーのようなものです。
多くの観客が走っている選手を応援します。
やっぱりスポーツは生で見るのが一番ですね。
Last Sunday, I watched an Ekiden at my grandmother's house.
Ekiden is a traditional Japanese sport, a kind of long-distance relay race covering several kilometers.
Many people cheer for the runners.
After all, the best way to watch sports is to see them live.
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# Corrections by DMM teacher
「Ekiden」✅✅✅✅✅
Last Sunday, I watched Ekiden in my grandmother's house.
Ekiden is a traditional Japanese sport, a kind of long-distance relay race covering several kilometers.
Many people cheer up the runners.
After all, the best way to watch sports is to see them live.